Thanks for your prompt reply. Personally, I prefer to put my opinion in the conclusion — it shows I have arrived at this conclusion after a careful consideration of all sides.
Please note: these are past essay questions which have been used this month.
Discuss both views and give your opinion. One reason adolescents from around the age of 13 to 17 ought to focus on learning as many different subjects as possible is that they are too immature to make serious decisions that will affect their future.
Furthermore, their ability to concentrate on one specific subject and study in depth is fully established at that age, unlike when they were younger. You should also give yourself a few minutes at the end to evaluate your vocabulary and make sure you have not made any mistakes.
In the long term you should think about starting a vocabulary book. In my view From my point of view So just give your first instinct opinion and don't try to out-think yourself.
Your coherence will also improve if you use the structure I suggested above and you should also check out the structures for the other types of essay.
Now, after your confirmation I am confident for my introduction and how to write it — interpretation of question so examiner can judge the question reading from there only.